So this is your first map eh, well there are certain things everyone should strive for in their first map. And you've got one of them "Not Geonosis" but you're falling short in certain areas. My Diagnosis(just what I'd like to see)
Different sky, the standard yavin sky doesn't fit at all, pick a different one.
Different textures, it looked like the ground in the pics was all one texture. Change it up a little, it adds realism.
Diffrerent planet, Hoth to me is a GCW planet. Look on Wookipedia for different one(there aren't many but some have never been mapped before)
Different size, make sure this map isn't too big, so many maps missed this area and their creators wnet all out. Concord Dawn is really big, Raxus Prime(YanKFan)is way too big, bigger does not mean "EPIC" mainly boring.
Different thrill, this map looks like it needs more help in this area than the others. Make sure the AI is smart, hard but not to hard, does one vehicle dominate the map, is the balance tipped in one sides favor. These come first and formost in any map, secondly add something to set this map apart. The underground turret controls are a great idea think of some more.
You can map this beginners map awesome, follow the advice of experienced map makers and use your own creativity. Kepp it up!
