Dark117's YSG- Yavin Sniper Grounds!

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:57 pm

My map will be coming out in 2-4 days. Its a fun sniper map that will keep you entertained for hours. You'll see it when it comes out! >.<

JackSkratch · Post by **JackSkratch** » Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:15 pm

2-4 days is 1-3 days too soon to be posting this if there are no screenies...

Post by **Epena** » Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:59 pm

Please people! This is like the fourth topic int he last week without screenshot backup. Please read the sub-forum rules before posting.

If you don't provide screens of your map within three days of your posting of the topic, I'm going to have to close this. If that does occur, just PM me and I'll re-open it.

Xavious · Post by **Xavious** » Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:28 pm

You could at least post some information about the map....

arty · Post by **arty** » Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:40 pm

Darthmaul: Its self explanatory

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:43 am

lol thnaks for backing me arty. I shall post screenies. My map takes place on the lush green grassy sniper grounds of yavin where your bound to get a bullet in your head. My map contains, hills, mountains, percipatatation in the bloody form, raining from the sky as your battle armour gets drenched. (blood or fruit punch, yur choice

) my map supports conquest in both eras and it supports her0 assult. Theres a stunning lake with dead bodys at the bottem. Which you shall soon join

. Muahahahahahah. Lol. theres speeder bikes and a cut off part of the map were there is intensive battle with sniper and many vehicles and turrents for the people who want the quick pased killing. Have fun putting holes in yur buds head. Because no matter how many times you kill him hell be coming back! Lots of scenery, sniper towers, rocks, COVER in the most important part, and some secrets to discover =).

Post screenie's soon, Please dont lock this moderators.

~Dark117

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 1:08 pm

Heres a bunch of randomly takin pics of the map... (screenies) Theres much more to the map and the quality was reduced in the pics. Hope you like the screenies!

http://s120.photobucket.com/albums/o188/Dark117/YSG/

Galactic_Marine · Post by **Galactic_Marine** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:56 pm

You probably already know this and are working on it, but the ground texture needs to change.

Post by **Gogie** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 3:01 pm

Its a fun sniper map that will keep you entertained for hours

I think the loading screen keeps me more entertained than the screen shots.

1. Add foliage.
2. Add Texture.
3. More buildings.
4. extreme lack of props, no cover to hide in
5. Yavin should have trees not stone spires.
6. No ammo droids
7. change sky.

sorry to be so negative about it, please consider it to be constructive critisism

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 4:59 pm

I told you those pics were bad... Those stone spires are actuly trees but since im so zoomed out you couldent c the leaves due to the transparency... There is foilage, 2 types of grass... There many bunkers... theres huts,rocks, trees ect... Theres like gazillion ammo droids... and the sky is good...

I TOLD YOU THE PICKS WERE BAD!

And the secret is 3 health droids, 1 you cant use and i more like wow thats wierd, the 2 others are hidden and secret for the two regions of the map.

Thats y i didnt want to post screenies and i said they were random, bad quality and the pics left out alot. >.< Play the map wen it comes out, once i get vehicles to work some how.

In other words... I have enrything you said was bad...

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:33 pm

By the way this is my first map and thanks for all the 'support' oo well... *sigh*

As for all the critisism you were wrong... and for the sky part, thats y its a Yavin map...

Post by **Gogie** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:34 pm

Even if the screen shots are really bad, that doesnt really explain much, I mean, even if your LOD and veiw distance were down you could still show close ups, and you showed images of your units, so you still dont have very many props or objects added in.

Take screenies with LOD and veiw on high, and everything else on low, and I might be a little more impressed.

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 5:51 pm

well heres 4 more screen shots for no-one, and i took these before i read your post Gogie, so these arent wat you were looking for...

http://s120.photobucket.com/albums/o188/Dark117/YSG/

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:10 pm

Well heres 5 more screenies of changes i made:

1.More Trees
2.Hills around border of map
3.More scenery such as a waterfalls
4.Vehicle props added in =)
5.Made the passage way for the vehicles to go around the lake.

And i finaly got in the screenies of the dead troopers. Theres alot under the lake and some on the ground.

Oo and the sky does fit because the red rain looks nice with that sky, sort of like a dark sun shower...

~Dark117

Razgriz · Post by **Razgriz** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:13 pm

hey Dark117 two things
1. instead of double posting use the edit button on the prievous post to add stuff to your message
2. if you need skins im here to help

PieDude797 · Post by **PieDude797** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 8:38 pm

I noticed one little tiny flaw in the map in one of the screen shots

Just little things. No big deal really

Post by **Epena** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:08 pm

I'd consider this a pretty good start for a first map, keep up your work!

One thing that you might consider doing is making some high up platforms on either side, or surrounding the playing field that are connected, so that you can snipe those from across the map that are on them, and also to prey on the losers below.

PieDude797 · Post by **PieDude797** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:17 pm

Oooo, now looking at the pic i posted, it's really fuzzy and i covered up the gap with the circle, i can see if any of you guys can't notice the gap, but, it's hardly noticible anyway. I would reccommend fixing the platform though and making it larger. i could just imagine, walking that far up then falling off the edge and having to go climb up it again.

Dark117 · Post by **Dark117** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:27 pm

This is the type of feedback I wanted =)

@piedude797= About that

it works fine anyways.. i mean seriously if you want me to fix it... But when i run up it it works awsomly fine!

@Epena= Does yur name symbolize the horse from Zelda by any chance? And i will add 4 super high towers too the corners of the map, but i dont know about connectin dem.

Well i would also like to know wat makes my map not a map were people are gonna say *Cant wait to play!* And wat changes i can make that you people want, obviously i tell you those screens dont show the map, you gotta play it with many people, then tell me. Well well c as for now. Appreciate the feedback!

EDIT: Oo and i was reading some posts and people say...
Oo Finaly a map with-out that preset Yavin Sky
So i decided since people seem to be obsessed about the sky ill figure out how to change it and put in a nicer one =). Would appreciate some help in doing this and also help in getting a speederbike prop. Would someone mind making one? Well i'd appreciate if you would.

~Dark117

arty · Post by **arty** » Tue Jan 02, 2007 10:47 pm

NEW FEATURES

Dude this map looks sweet for a starter! You could possibly add new features to the game instead of the same old units that spawn and then die. Maybe even a new type of hero. Use your imagination! Since this is a made up map, you can apply any types of changes to your map.

-Have fun, and I'll help ya out if you ever need me!
Arty

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