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Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 8:36 pm
by philomen
ALARIS PRIME: River Ambush
ok this is my second map ever made and my first map to be ever released so i hope u will like it
Story:
Ok the map is pretty staight forward...
After the second battle of Alaris Prime, the 79th assault battalion is called
in to destroy every last Cis base,outpost,unit on alaris prime.
Each base they found was abandonned until now, it seems every
last droid has assembled near this river to make one last stand
its up to you to destroy the cis occupants or help them regain their lost territory!
there are costum sides and pretty much a battle for every style ... it all depends where u are on the map!
new link

:
http://starwarsbattlefront.filefront.co ... entsResult
download link :
http://files.filefront.com/ALARISzip/;1 ... einfo.html
screenshots:
A Big thanks to everyone that helped me for this map

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 9:25 pm
by elfie
This has quite potential. For a first map it is quite excellent.

You must have put a lot of effort into this. And welcome to gametoast! It is good to see that we have a new very creative map maker!

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Tue Jul 08, 2008 10:02 pm
by philomen
yes i've worked alot on this map but i also got help from people at filefront

anyways ... i hope you will enjoy this map and please leave feedback
Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 3:25 am
by MandeRek
I rated a 7/10.. For a first map, good job! I only have 3 points:
- More objects: the part with water is fun but i'm getting shot and i can't see wherefrom
- Intelligent AI^: If you've got more object, make the AI snipe at some places or drop mines.. Also make some good nodepads(?) and stuff
- Sides: Could be a bit more original.. Even fancy canon sides can be newly made, f.e. a Republic 1st stage armored legion..
I enjoyed playing it very much! If you need help in the future i'ld be glad to help you

Well done

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 5:13 pm
by philomen
kk thx for the feedback ... i'll see what i can do about this ... i just gotta fix the texture probleme ... there is only 1 detail appearing and i don't know what to do

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Wed Jul 09, 2008 7:17 pm
by (502)GEN.york
Looks awosome nice
Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 10:14 am
by philomen
ok i will probably make a 2.0 version of this map so i need to know what to keep,change,remove in this map ... just post what you think should be looked at and i will try my best to do it

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 3:10 am
by White_Bear
Awesome for a first map! Like it.
Things to do:
Instead of repeating weapons like the auto-turret, make a new grenade like a shake-grenade.
Add vehicles.
9/10 from me

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 8:30 am
by Sky_216
Looks pretty good for a first.

Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:56 am
by AlexSecura
Good map. I liked to play it but i missed something.Did you added lightning/light bloom to it? .It looks......querrish.The Object Setting is well done.
You could add some AT-XT`s.They would fit good.Some more Ruins like in Methlyn or Rhen Var would be cool.
Some Grass Textures should be removed.They are floating .Forgot which CP but theres a Coreship and theres the grass.

If i found some more bugs i make some screens and post them here.
6.5/10
Re: Alaris Prime: River Ambush
Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 2:12 pm
by PsYcH0_]-[aMsT3r
For a first map, this look really nice! 7.5/10! I remember my first map: Tatooine: PsYcH0 Town = a random jumble of buildings and no specs cus I killed the scripts!