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Spain eh, see the spoiler.
@Nihillo and Spiderpig: Yep, that's what I wanted.
@mswf: I didn't realise it was industrial, it just looked snowy to me.

Adding another bridge below would be great, but make it sort of a fighter launch area. That is if you include gunships and such, which brings me to my next question.
Adding fighters would be cool, just add some platforms beyond the mountains, and view range. That way it won't feel like an "isolated battle island."
Adding some small buildings to the side of the new bridge would help look more incorporated.

Lots of new, good ideas, can't wait for this map to come out!

The map will maintain their buildings, bridges and platforms originals, I'm doing this: add a new bridge like the movie, a battle up and down, I try to put a ladder or ramp to access the new bridge, respecting the number of Troopers: have many units on the battlefield because the map will be bigger with new bridges and access ramps, but I will make two, with a maximum of 32 units and another with over 150 units on the battlefield, so you can download which you like more.

Adding another bridge below would be great, but make it sort of a fighter launch area. That is if you include gunships and such, which brings me to my next question.
Adding fighters would be cool, just add some platforms beyond the mountains, and view range. That way it won't feel like an "isolated battle island."
Adding some small buildings to the side of the new bridge would help look more incorporated.

Lots of new, good ideas, can't wait for this map to come out!

I'll try to put almost everything, there are many good ideas but I need time and I cannot put them all, but to be a good map I'll try to put everything

If you have too many units in that bridge, it will be easy to just shoot at the horizon and kill someone.

Maybe if you add some destroyed AT-TEs or LAATs to the bridge, you can prevent that from happening.

Nihillo wrote:If you have too many units in that bridge, it will be easy to just shoot at the horizon and kill someone.

Maybe if you add some destroyed AT-TEs or LAATs to the bridge, you can prevent that from happening.

yes, I had thought, now I'm just overloaded with school and have little time to edit it much

Nice new pictures.
The map looks good
Are there just three units fighting on the brige?

Perhaps some improvement suggestions:
build a huge bridge system all over the map.
Add some buildings to the new bridges.
Add the dust on the High bridges.
Reskinn all mygeeto buildings, bridges etc. make them darker ( like in the movie )
Make the central building higher.
Add destroyed UT-AT and add UT-ATs to the map.

Good map my friend. looks very promising.

a suggestion:

You may add a slightly darker lighting, to give dark environment. I refer to a static light in ZE.

ForceMaster wrote:Good map my friend. looks very promising.

a suggestion:

You may add a slightly darker lighting, to give dark environment. I refer to a static light in ZE.

thanks friend , I was doing the lighting, I hope it looks good

Leonhart_501 wrote:

ForceMaster wrote:Good map my friend. looks very promising.

a suggestion:

You may add a slightly darker lighting, to give dark environment. I refer to a static light in ZE.

thanks friend , I was doing the lighting, I hope it looks good

wow you are a master skinning , i though there is snow on mygeeto, nice effect of burnings

DEVISS-REX wrote:

Leonhart_501 wrote:

ForceMaster wrote:Good map my friend. looks very promising.

a suggestion:

You may add a slightly darker lighting, to give dark environment. I refer to a static light in ZE.

thanks friend , I was doing the lighting, I hope it looks good

wow you are a master skinning , i though there is snow on mygeeto, nice effect of burnings

thanks DEVISS-REX, but i need your help for more skins xD

Now, for all members: Do you like this atte effect snow / ash?

It looks pretty good, but I'd lessen the overall amount of white.

Now, for all members: Do you like this atte effect snow / ash?

Looks good, though you maybe need to keep in mind that some details (dents,protrusions) are sometimes only textured on, so you need to make the effect look like it isn't sprayed over the texture, but over a battered old vehicle

Looks good, though you maybe need to keep in mind that some details (dents,protrusions) are sometimes only textured on, so you need to make the effect look like it isn't sprayed over the texture, but over a battered old vehicle

i don't understant very good this, but this skin is only a test; i improve the atte drestroyed

this looks really good for a first map but is this just a new bridge added to the old map or a whole new map?

Looks nice abit like BF0 though

Dom380 wrote:this looks really good for a first map but is this just a new bridge added to the old map or a whole new map?

thanks =)
two new bridges added to original map

Leonhart_501 wrote:

Looks good, though you maybe need to keep in mind that some details (dents,protrusions) are sometimes only textured on, so you need to make the effect look like it isn't sprayed over the texture, but over a battered old vehicle

i don't understant very good this, but this skin is only a test; i improve the atte drestroyed

Sorry about that, I only meant to make a minor suggestion to a minor detail. I didn't mean to cause more confusion with my bad english...

mswf wrote:

Leonhart_501 wrote:

Looks good, though you maybe need to keep in mind that some details (dents,protrusions) are sometimes only textured on, so you need to make the effect look like it isn't sprayed over the texture, but over a battered old vehicle

i don't understant very good this, but this skin is only a test; i improve the atte drestroyed

Sorry about that, I only meant to make a minor suggestion to a minor detail. I didn't mean to cause more confusion with my bad english...

You do not confuse me xD, I said that I accept all kinds of suggestions, Also my English is not good =)
don't worry mswf

@Leonhart: Your english is fine. It's not great, but it's good.
@msfw: Your english actually is perfectly fine. Didn't know it wasn't your first language until you said that it wasn't good english.

Leonhart, this looks pretty sweet. But about the AT-TE, as msfw said, there's too much ash and it covers up all of the detail. Dents and such aren't always part of the model, they're usually prat of the skin, so you want to make details partially see-through most of the time.

@Leonhart: Your english is fine. It's not great, but it's good.

thanks/gracias =)

Leonhart, this looks pretty sweet. But about the AT-TE, as msfw said, there's too much ash and it covers up all of the detail. Dents and such aren't always part of the model, they're usually prat of the skin, so you want to make details partially see-through most of the time.

I already said that the atte was just a test for members opinions, my intention was to put the''effect'' ash because ash adheres and mixed with ice stain anithing xD, this i tough =)

A great start. I like your reskinned crashed AT-TE and LAAT. The layout of the map seems very good. Only perhaps some UT-AT's to finish it off. Perhaps adding some additional eras would be good too like BFX .