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Hello GT community, i am new here and this is my first map and i have been working on it for about 2 weeks. It has both eras and so far is about 65% done. I have got planning, barriering, and object placing done. I am still working on the sides, i have customized the Alliance, Empire and Republic. Please comment on this and give suggestions and i would appreciate if someone would like to beta later to help me out scince it is my first map.
Screens I am not done with any of the sides because i will be adding custom units. Also i was wondering if anyone would think it a good idea to give a command vehicle to each side, like atte,Mtt,Hovernaught,and atat? Also, i am trying to add a diff wep for each award wep, because i think ur gun should also change just not the ordanace or laser it fires.
Credits so far: Please comment!

EDIT: Need some help with this problem also if you have time thanks! forums/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=25389 <------solved
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Very good for your first map. I really like the snowtrooper skins, and I think giving one command vehicle for each side is a good idea. The Darktrooper skin looks just a little saturated though imo.

Looks great! I would make the eyes and black pieces more pronounced on the darktrooper.

The terrain should be smoothed out in some places to give the map a more professional look, but I agree that you're off to a great start.

Looks really good for a first map, I would have recomened that you do not do custom units for your first map, but since I did for mkine I cant talk. Keep up the good work

Yeah, looks like a great start

Can we get an overview picture of the map too?

Wow! This is your first map? It doesn't looks like a first map. It's great!

btw; The AT-XT was made by Pandemic and Psych0fred, and the pauldron on troopers is RepSharpshooter's one, I think.

the map looks great

there are a few things you should change:

empire trooper: the logo on their helmet isn't good

rep trooper: The Kama looks paint brush

That was it the others looks

great work
and this is really your first map?

Fantastic! A command walker wouldn't be a bad idea! Just blend your terrain.

Here is an overview of my map currently I will blend the terrain more and i will have to move some of the foliage so command vehicles can move about, right now there is not a problem with normal vehicles going through the paths and barriers.
@naru1305
yup first map ever, cus i have to mod back and forth on two cpus cus my laptop with windows7 can't run munging and the fix doesn't work for it...so i put my files on a flashdrive and take it to another cpu that is suuuuppperr slow.....but can munge and use the Bf2_modtools.exe file and make bf2 logs so it takes a little longer for me to work cus i do as they advise and make a few changes and munge. So please tell me what u think about the map overview in zeroedit.

Looks really nice!
and welcome to the forum

looks good but the team 1 vehicle spawn looks pretty close to the edge of the map

acryptozoo wrote:looks good but the team 1 vehicle spawn looks pretty close to the edge of the map

Shouldn't be an issue if your view of the map boundary is blocked by that row of hills, but then you have to make sure that the hills look realistic, and not just I-put-a-slope-here-to-avoid-learning-how-to-make-map-boundaries. Overall, imo, the "hills" around the borders of your map seem a touch too uniform and artificial.

looks good but the team 1 vehicle spawn looks pretty close to the edge of the map

Thats why i have an unscaleable wall, a death region and trees to make it look like a canyon surrounded by a forrest. Also i made the canyon wall just high enough that you can't see over it from anywhere in the areas of the map the ai will use lol
EDIT: there is a boundary woo hoo and ill try and blend it more

Looks good but for future reference, I would have the main map design more in the center of the terrain, and not near the edges. It's just easier to hide the map edges.

your map looks a bit angled but the idea is great

I think the ground texture should be darker, it looks too white and it doesn't match with the grey spires.

i think the floor texture is great but if you change it you may can add bloody red where many die

the red would be interesting scince there is three main obvious choke points. i can add dead troopers but if someone could tell me how to make objects era only in zeroedit cus then i could add it to the script.